2nd Draft

I think we are doing very well, we have the lights almost finished, they are looking very good. When Maddie and I are alone on stage we decided to put two colors, the orange represents me, but the blue represents Maddie. This is the scene that we have to improve the most, because we added it this week. We also have the lights for the transition to sleep, I like these lights a lot because it has figures.
Caroline was also practicing the war scene, she will be moving around the stage and suddenly a bomb will fall and she will run away. At that moment I will be in bed and I will have to wake up from sleep.
We have to finish the sounds we need, we have already made the war one, but we have to finish the sound of the flight

Strengths/Weaknesses

I think you have almost everything done, we have to mount the scene of war, lights and sounds and some details. The problem we had last week changed the first part of the first scene. now we have to reduce that part. We also have to see how I have to move in the cane during the dream.
Our group is also a little worried because you don't know if the paudience is going to understand the scenes we are doing, that's why we change the beginning of the first scene.